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the jumping is just horrendous. You need to be able to jump higher or at least not fall to the ground 100 times faster than you went up. Controls would be nice to include. It took me 3 tries to figure out that the ctrl key shoots! Its only barely possible to pass the turtle without shooting it and impossible to beat the game even with shooting. The collision detection sucks too. It feels like you put a square surrounding every movie clip in the game that makes you die when you touch it. Also, the first turtle can walk onto the spot where you spawn. This is annoying since the whole game doesnt restart when you die so the turtle might happen to standing there when you spawn. The graphics are decent but spongebob's animation makes no sense. His expressions seem to change randomly whenever he does something. Spongebob and the treausure? More like Spongebob and the shit sandwich of fucking frustration.
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But that was the extent of it. I really wish there had been at least a little movement in the characters. The art was great but the animation was limited to the mouths. It was funny though so thats worth alot.
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The only good parts were The first and last. It seems that your idea was start it off with a good impression and end with one. That would have worked if all of the other parts pretty much sucked. Being that you are working with lines you should have been a little more creative. I liked the idea of the lines becoming drawings but i want to seem them animated after that, I don't just want to see how to draw some random shape.
Author's Response:
Okay, thank you anyway ;)
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I don't judge on length unless the joke needed more time to be developed. The quality of the animation is what should be judged. The reason i'm not giving you a 10 is because the guards walk was kind of choppy and the grass wasn't that great. The joke and the timing was perfect though. Don't let the low score get you down, you have some talent.
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I'm going to make a list:
Pros:
1.The main character is somewhat well drawn.
2. i like the song
Cons:
1. The background is boring.
2. You didn't animate a walking sequence.
3. You didn't even bother changing the direction of shading for when he turns.
4. You move extremely slowly
5. There is no challenge whatsoever.
6. The "portals" are just one color circles with a glow added to them.
I could go on but I'm lazy. Try again but take some time to look at detail and don't be afraid to make the game hard. I would rather play an overly hard game then an overly easy one. Also, try upping the frame rate so everything goes faster.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your criticism, I'm not being sarcastic. It really does help me figure out what I need to change.
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I was watching the street fighter collab and noticed that it got daily second. I was confused on how something could have beaten something so epic. When i saw this my mind was instantly changed. You had a nice animation style and a great story. Good job.
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You need a better voice actor than yourself. No offense but your voice is too high for master chief's. You actually had a great voice for cortana though. it reminded me of navi's voice from "the real legend of zelda" but the movie kind of sucked.
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I saw this cause you used my song. ( thanks) I've watched it everyday since I just love the style of animation and the humor. Favorite'd.
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This could be a pretty good series. The animation felt a little choppy but it was fine for a beginner. I just think it needed length. Maybe make a series where multiple people work together to get over the gap or compete to be first one over.
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I admit the joke was funny but the animation wasn't very good. I always thought about that when i read the books.
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