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Great idea using a dry erase board for animation. Nice drawings and pretty smooth animations. 3 weeks is alot of work for stop motion. hope to see more from you. Maybe longer next time? it's the only problem really.
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The three weeks was due to the fact of importing it to flash and learning how to compress. Also it was a school project so I only had an hour a day to work on it.
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It's more of a time waster than an actual game. Maybe add some characters. Actually if you want i could do some character's for you. Although i feel my score is kind of biased. ( You used my song =])
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As soon as i saw the description i knew it was fake. I watched it anyway. To tell you the truth i thought the thing after the spam was actually pretty funny. Of course since it is a lieing spam movie with little animation i can't rate it too high...
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ACool
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The jokes were decent, i thought it was kind of funny. The lip syncing was terrible. It seemed like you made a movie clip that looped the same mouth no matter what they were saying. You would have their tongue at their teeth for a "th" sound while they were saying S. Fix the lip syncing and i would rate this much higher.
Author's Response:
Really, I never really had a problem with lip syncing, but I do see what you mean. It might have been that it was my first time I used tweens to lip sync, but I'll make sure to double check my lip syncing work next time. Thanks for the review!
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I've been thinking of making a video for that song for days. When i saw this i thought you beat me to it and when i made it people would accuse me of being unoriginal. Fortunately for me, i found that there is little animation in this. It's more like a montage of link running, a few badly drawn effects ( fairy blood etc..), and a scrolling camera. I can only give you a 6 because this has so much potential but not enough actual animation. I"ll be making one of these to compete with yours soon, watch out. =)
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It kind of over complicated the process. You just have to paste right into flash and trace bitmap. then you get the same results after doing half the work.
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Nope, that's not how it works in flash 8!
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You made a great clay model of kirby. The aniamtion was smooth and it was kind of funny. i wish it could have been longer though. I know it must have taken quite some time to make what you already have so i'm only taking one of for the length
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Your animation was smooth and you used the sprites well. But you need sound effects. don't quote me on this but this will probably score below a 3.25 even though there is great effort into. I reccomend adding sound effects then resubmitting. THat could change it to at least a 3.50. ( i wrote this before it passed so don't hold the scores i said it would get against me)
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Sorry to say that this is pretty poor work. Besides the fact that it's poor appearance overall and shortness, The walking motion doesn't look good. The character's body and head are completely still during the walk. His arms don't move. And you basically only created two different frames. Please don't use the excuse that it was supposed to be basic though. If you wanted to make it simple you would put the simple first with the option to do more advanced techniques.
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jesus people it is for freakin n00bs.
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it was nice to see all of the old versions of the characters. I never read the whole story though. Just bits and pieces of it. Was that really how it ended in the comics? sad =(
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