Alexman159's Banner
Alexman159

Age/Gender: 14, Male
Location: Kansas
Job: student

Contact Info

Newgrounds Stats

Sign-Up Date:
9/19/07

Level: 15
Aura: Dark

Rank: Police Officer
Blams: 207
Saves: 489
Rank #: 11,198

Whistle Status: Normal

Exp. Points: 2,440 / 2,500
Exp. Rank #: 11,796
Voting Pow.: 5.73 votes

BBS Posts: 1,086 (1.35 per day)
Flash Reviews: 62
Music Reviews: 85
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0

All Flash Reviews

62 Reviews | 18 w/ Responses

Newer Older

Page: [ 1 | 2 ]


Score: 5
Teh Dot Trilogy: Collab

"meh"

date: June 28, 2009

The only good parts were The first and last. It seems that your idea was start it off with a good impression and end with one. That would have worked if all of the other parts pretty much sucked. Being that you are working with lines you should have been a little more creative. I liked the idea of the lines becoming drawings but i want to seem them animated after that, I don't just want to see how to draw some random shape.

July 3, 2009

Author's Response:

Okay, thank you anyway ;)

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
People think this is a useless review.

Score: 3
Portal Hopper

"Not very good.."

submission: Portal Hopper
date: May 19, 2009

I'm going to make a list:

Pros:
1.The main character is somewhat well drawn.
2. i like the song
Cons:
1. The background is boring.
2. You didn't animate a walking sequence.
3. You didn't even bother changing the direction of shading for when he turns.
4. You move extremely slowly
5. There is no challenge whatsoever.
6. The "portals" are just one color circles with a glow added to them.

I could go on but I'm lazy. Try again but take some time to look at detail and don't be afraid to make the game hard. I would rather play an overly hard game then an overly easy one. Also, try upping the frame rate so everything goes faster.

May 19, 2009

Author's Response:

Thank you for your criticism, I'm not being sarcastic. It really does help me figure out what I need to change.

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
People find this review helpful!

Score: 8
CC Stop Animation

"short and sweet"

submission: CC Stop Animation
date: February 2, 2009

Great idea using a dry erase board for animation. Nice drawings and pretty smooth animations. 3 weeks is alot of work for stop motion. hope to see more from you. Maybe longer next time? it's the only problem really.

February 2, 2009

Author's Response:

The three weeks was due to the fact of importing it to flash and learning how to compress. Also it was a school project so I only had an hour a day to work on it.

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
No users have weighed in on this review.

Score: 6
x_Naruto Hentai Gallery_x

"I knew it"

date: January 16, 2009

As soon as i saw the description i knew it was fake. I watched it anyway. To tell you the truth i thought the thing after the spam was actually pretty funny. Of course since it is a lieing spam movie with little animation i can't rate it too high...

January 17, 2009

Author's Response:

ACool

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
People find this review helpful!

Score: 7
Oooo A Tankie

"it's ok..."

submission: Oooo A Tankie
date: January 16, 2009

The jokes were decent, i thought it was kind of funny. The lip syncing was terrible. It seemed like you made a movie clip that looped the same mouth no matter what they were saying. You would have their tongue at their teeth for a "th" sound while they were saying S. Fix the lip syncing and i would rate this much higher.

January 17, 2009

Author's Response:

Really, I never really had a problem with lip syncing, but I do see what you mean. It might have been that it was my first time I used tweens to lip sync, but I'll make sure to double check my lip syncing work next time. Thanks for the review!

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
No users have weighed in on this review.

Score: 3
Intermediate Sprite Tut

"not the best way to do it"

date: December 30, 2008

It kind of over complicated the process. You just have to paste right into flash and trace bitmap. then you get the same results after doing half the work.

December 30, 2008

Author's Response:

Nope, that's not how it works in flash 8!

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
People find this review helpful!

Score: 3
Basic Walking Tutorial

"Not very good"

date: December 12, 2008

Sorry to say that this is pretty poor work. Besides the fact that it's poor appearance overall and shortness, The walking motion doesn't look good. The character's body and head are completely still during the walk. His arms don't move. And you basically only created two different frames. Please don't use the excuse that it was supposed to be basic though. If you wanted to make it simple you would put the simple first with the option to do more advanced techniques.

December 14, 2008

Author's Response:

jesus people it is for freakin n00bs.

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
No users have weighed in on this review.

Score: 10
The Wanders of Space

"i need this song!"

date: November 27, 2008

i t was in kiki's delivery service and that one movie, howl's moving castle? did you have to buy it and whats the name. oh and the flash had an ambient feel. I'ma gona go watch howl's moving castle

November 27, 2008

Author's Response:

"Merry Go Round of Life" by Joe Hisaishi

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
People find this review helpful!

Score: 10
Ghostscape

"Awesome"

submission: Ghostscape
date: October 26, 2008

I got to about 20,000 points before i gave up. The bedroom with the ghost scared the crud of me. great scary game.

October 26, 2008

Author's Response:

LoL cool, glad you enjoyed it!

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
People find this review helpful!

Score: 10
Mario Bloopers 4

"Funny"

submission: Mario Bloopers 4
date: October 18, 2008

I thought it was fuinny in some parts but in others it wasn't. I've seen the mushroom making mario giant joke plenty of times so it wasn't quite as funny. My favorite part had to be the water scene because it was original.( Original jokes are hard in sprite movies these days)

October 18, 2008

Author's Response:

Haha yay thank you

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
No users have weighed in on this review.

Newer Older

Page: [ 1 | 2 ]